tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post3072996735080183468..comments2023-06-03T06:57:28.258-07:00Comments on Scenes From A Slowmoving Train: EndingsAnnie Jeffrieshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15415548089882625246noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-27300055567734002762007-05-27T19:38:00.000-07:002007-05-27T19:38:00.000-07:00This poem will make me think a lot about my specif...This poem will make me think a lot about my specific experiences. I am going to reread it a few times. Good job.<BR/><BR/>It is amazing how one can grow through reading a poem & figuring out what it means to them.Andi https://www.blogger.com/profile/08373098657928515718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-37700388513314325012007-05-26T07:40:00.000-07:002007-05-26T07:40:00.000-07:00[a} oh i see! i relate to it in a totally differen...[a} oh i see! i relate to it in a totally different way. so interesting how much everyone has in common, yet how different the specific experience was. this is what poetry teaches you! :)[a}https://www.blogger.com/profile/06965188295886556899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-18026500083418363922007-05-26T06:51:00.000-07:002007-05-26T06:51:00.000-07:00Wow, I can relate. The passing of a parent or pare...Wow, I can relate. The passing of a parent or parents can cause you to be quite reflective. Very touching poem.Jonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04299647754479967070noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-69248961234971605452007-05-25T14:56:00.000-07:002007-05-25T14:56:00.000-07:00Let the healing begin... :-)Let the healing begin... :-)Juliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04271616371758781735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-2213085447128567162007-05-25T14:21:00.000-07:002007-05-25T14:21:00.000-07:00[a} - the unexpected avenues are the places that m...[a} - the unexpected avenues are the places that my thoughts have lead me since my mother's death. These avenues have connected me to other people and other ways of interacting with them that have resulted in change. The changes have been good for me but it has been a sad journey with unexpected consequences.<BR/><BR/>Thank you for asking about this. I've Googled Ahadith to familiarize myself with the concept.Annie Jeffrieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15415548089882625246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-27086217633172786792007-05-25T13:24:00.000-07:002007-05-25T13:24:00.000-07:00This reminds me of an Ahadith about how prayer was...This reminds me of an Ahadith about how prayer washes rust away from the heart, and how the heart rusts daily, weakening ...um, something like that! With your line "inner thoughts. unexpected venures," do you mean that there are tunnels, connecting different thoughts, within?[a}https://www.blogger.com/profile/06965188295886556899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-45197886576095163822007-05-25T10:01:00.000-07:002007-05-25T10:01:00.000-07:00Your poem sounds sad and I'm sure there's a story ...Your poem sounds sad and I'm sure there's a story behind it. <BR/>Wishing you bright and happy days!<BR/>xoSusiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00024132046092264711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-18600144181908772252007-05-25T06:32:00.000-07:002007-05-25T06:32:00.000-07:00Your poem really pulls at emotions!By the way tomo...Your poem really pulls at emotions!<BR/>By the way tomorrow will be fun!Wandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06941735389982354519noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-14616223855071201042007-05-25T00:28:00.000-07:002007-05-25T00:28:00.000-07:00Don't "they" say black holes also create stars .....Don't "they" say black holes also create stars ..... so let the light shine through *!*Bimbimbiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12427788003822538655noreply@blogger.com