tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post4348617884639416995..comments2023-06-03T06:57:28.258-07:00Comments on Scenes From A Slowmoving Train: Haiku My HeartAnnie Jeffrieshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15415548089882625246noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-89724233192138822542013-02-15T08:37:17.360-08:002013-02-15T08:37:17.360-08:00Is that smoke tired of winter? of cold? I think ...Is that smoke tired of winter? of cold? I think that the wood of fruit trees is some of the finest...beautiful sentiments!Dawn Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03079162211848499285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-30457170684500405652013-02-14T08:40:21.879-08:002013-02-14T08:40:21.879-08:00how fitting for the beginning of Lent!
at first, I...how fitting for the beginning of Lent!<br />at first, I thought I'd been taken to the wrong site! the header is lovely and simple. love your free library! you have such an open heart. Nonniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08623569563122986528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-69181640617623659182013-02-12T07:07:14.960-08:002013-02-12T07:07:14.960-08:00love the imagery!love the imagery!momto8https://www.blogger.com/profile/13964950285763339907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-21876428426842596962013-02-10T21:24:31.341-08:002013-02-10T21:24:31.341-08:00Smoke can get tired too and drift also.. a beautif...Smoke can get tired too and drift also.. a beautiful haiku this.. I am happy to be here..hope you will too be happy visiting me here:<br /><br />http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/02/heart-pumps-happiness.html<br /><br />RS:)Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-7421298401047649652013-02-10T11:11:06.144-08:002013-02-10T11:11:06.144-08:00I can almost smell the smoke from your wood fire. ...I can almost smell the smoke from your wood fire. Evocative haiku.<br /><br />DarlaDarlahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02729017606957829830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-51648558530190826062013-02-10T05:59:39.550-08:002013-02-10T05:59:39.550-08:00I would never have thought to name the smoke as ti...I would never have thought to name the smoke as tired.... Lovely!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09325412578044357184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-76163700550266825092013-02-09T17:32:17.200-08:002013-02-09T17:32:17.200-08:00LOVE your new banner and background! LOVE IT!!!! X...LOVE your new banner and background! LOVE IT!!!! XOLeahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07101643429585271655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-58083041283384600212013-02-09T09:56:17.804-08:002013-02-09T09:56:17.804-08:00That smoke may be tired, but if it's from appl...That smoke may be tired, but if it's from apple wood, it's also fragrant!<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2013/02/08/drumming/" rel="nofollow"><b>Drumming haiku</b></a><br /><br />Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-28142558906235647302013-02-09T07:12:06.901-08:002013-02-09T07:12:06.901-08:00Tired smoke...love that image.
Peace !Tired smoke...love that image.<br />Peace !Kim Mailhothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13849980369873306402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-49947475839761153242013-02-08T19:01:20.522-08:002013-02-08T19:01:20.522-08:00I see the hands as well....and feel the warmth of ...I see the hands as well....and feel the warmth of it and your words.gmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04879507440579599549noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-72376558615530084182013-02-08T17:55:11.451-08:002013-02-08T17:55:11.451-08:00i can almost smell the fragrant smoke and feel the...i can almost smell the fragrant smoke and feel the warmth of this winter fire. we are expecting snow tonight and through the week, yet i noticed after my time daylight here is growing l o n g e r!!!!<br />thanks for being here annie and warming my evening.rebeccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05265802752790310923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-11535765544158602472013-02-08T16:35:45.998-08:002013-02-08T16:35:45.998-08:00I can almost smell this bonfire! I can almost smell this bonfire! Barbarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13843100240748270890noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-52091734994171099062013-02-08T13:28:39.618-08:002013-02-08T13:28:39.618-08:00I see the praying hands too!I see the praying hands too!WabiSabihttp://wabisabipoet.wordpress.com/2013/02/08/mighty-dawn/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-85763443648431554922013-02-08T13:05:22.632-08:002013-02-08T13:05:22.632-08:00love the last line... tired smoke rises... beautif...love the last line... tired smoke rises... beautiful haiku!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-2931053994070620742013-02-08T08:02:44.809-08:002013-02-08T08:02:44.809-08:00ashes to ashes...♥ashes to ashes...♥Priti Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06387174904054579172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-20329047854685433462013-02-08T07:19:32.236-08:002013-02-08T07:19:32.236-08:00♥
{{ my wonky vision
saw hands
~~praying~~
in th...♥<br /><br />{{ my wonky vision<br />saw hands <br />~~praying~~<br />in the raised wood log<br />there on the right ...<br />but <br />then <br />again<br /><br />i would ... }}somepinkflowershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07553884470329083831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-87374085895316067612013-02-08T06:29:08.583-08:002013-02-08T06:29:08.583-08:00Quite charming. I haven't smelled or seen smok...Quite charming. I haven't smelled or seen smoke in awhile. Lovely words.Hazelhttp://stasiadesiderata.wordpress.com/2013/02/07/twilight-in-the-field/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-34013628357553847762013-02-08T04:25:23.955-08:002013-02-08T04:25:23.955-08:00Yes, this evokes a drive through Adelaide's hi...Yes, this evokes a drive through Adelaide's hills here in South Australia - where they are many orchards ...and that winter and wood smoke combination.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24228581.post-46480941440377194732013-02-07T22:35:54.463-08:002013-02-07T22:35:54.463-08:00This brings back childhood memories for me... I ca...This brings back childhood memories for me... I can still see that smoke rising... sparked by your lovely haiku and image...Leahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07101643429585271655noreply@blogger.com