Wednesday, May 10, 2006

Haiku #5 - Freeform style

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Sand in my eyes.
Ankles swollen.
Shallow breathing.

Wistful yearnings.
Changes needed.

2 comments:

paris parfait said...

I can identify with this lovely poem!

Left-handed Trees... said...

There is something very powerful in such a spare form...you use it well.