Saturday, September 09, 2006

One Deep Breath - Solitude

Not precisely a Haiku this week but . . .

Searching within
Only to find
Loss and confusion.
Interior castles
Unexpected lessons
Echoes everlasting.


S.L. White said...

Good job, AnnieElf! Different, but what fun and what great insights.

mikim said...

Really like the way you used the letters of the word "Solitude" to begin each line. Also, "Interior castles Teaching Unespected lessons Daily Echoes everlasting."- is beautiful!

paris parfait said...

Lovely poem, Annie! Very thoughtful - a dialogue with self. Wonderful!

Autrice DelDrago said...

It isn't Haiku, but it's deep!

Tongue in Cheek Antiques said...

taking time in solitude gives rise to growth, one that shows us how to breath and let go.