Monday, November 05, 2007

One Deep Breath - Loneliness











Di'mond hardness chokes,
Weighed breath forages within,
Lonely ache waiting.
















12 comments:

tumblewords said...

Nicely done! The photo is the epitome of loneliness.

christine said...

This conveys the experience well. I like that photo! Very nice. Thank you.

coconutannies said...

Very poignant! How painful - that "lonely ache"!
Beautiful!

Crafty Green Poet said...

very sad, the emptiness of loneliness

Britt-Arnhild said...

Beautiful

qualcosa di bello said...

what a beautiful capture of the physical pain of loneliness!

Kahshe Cottager said...

I've been lax in my visiting perhaps this is why I am finding your writing more powerful now. I enjoyed browsing through your recent postings Annie ~ you seem so much stronger! Congrats on the weight loss ~ not easy and sometimes frustratingly slow, but you are heading in the right direction!

Hugs
Jennie

Mary Timme said...

Ah-h-h-h-h-h!

Cre8Tiva said...

i love those windmills in california...this is such a poignant piece...blessings, rebecca

Gledwood said...

Was that taken anywhere near your home?

Rae Trigg said...

Beautiful description of loneliness.

Clare said...

Powerful feeling of loneliness and isolation -- and of being exposed/naked without anything to comfort it. Wow! Well done!
:)