Thursday, November 15, 2007

Twilight

Ten minutes after five Wind sends gentle ripples In soft undulations Lightly across water's surface In endless eddies, Going round in rings, Hastening The setting sun.



9 comments:

qualcosa di bello said...

all i can say is WOW!!! that is a perfect "twilight in words"!

tumblewords said...

Lovely, lovely and the photo compounds it. Nicely done!!!

Rethabile said...

Very nice. I enjoyed studying the picture first, then reading your poem. What's an eddy? Where's that dictionary...

Kahshe Cottager said...

Annie, I can not tell you how much I have enjoyed reading your recent postings. I do not visit as often as I would like - stuff in my life seems to interfere!

Hugs
Jennie

Inspired Tokens said...

I always enjoy your words. They somehow always touch my heart.

aka Danny Wise said...

TWILIGHT very clever! I like it..

Pauline said...

splendid! Makes me want to try one like this myself. I've come back three times already just to listen and read that little verse

turquoise cro said...

Sweet! I LOVE twilight! I have 2 art pieces titled "Twilight" hehe

Crafty Green Poet said...

that's a clever idea!