Saturday, July 28, 2012

Haiku Heights and Haiku My Heart



Never forget me
Forget me not, beloved
Warm my chill blue heart

















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13 comments:

  1. Vaishali Jain3:37 AM

    I liked the, "Warm my chill blue heart" Well written, Annie!

    Btw, there are more than 17 syllables in your haiku.

    Keep writing! :)

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  2. J C4:32 AM

    Great haiki. Picture fits it perfectly. Love it.

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  3. Sri Valli5:36 AM

    Beautiful haiku straight from heart!

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  4. carol l mck6:48 AM

    ...warm my chill blue heart ~ wonderfully contemplative haiku ~~ thanks, namaste, (A Creative Harbor)

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  5. Chèvrefeuille5:02 PM

    A wonderfully crafted haiku in good balance and very strong in his meaning. As the other commenters already said ... that last sentence is great.

    Namaste

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  6. Annie Jeffries5:08 PM

    All fixed, Vaishali. Thanks for the heads up. :-)

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  7. Ron.5:12 PM

    Memorable work. Well done.

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  8. Magical Mystical Teacher6:42 PM

    May the warmth come!

    My Forget-Me-Nots

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  9. Vinay Leo R.10:33 PM

    Very interesting haiku!

    Leo

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  10. Vaishali Jain5:35 AM

    You're welcome, Annie! The change fits well too. :)

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  11. sandy6:56 PM

    i like this! and the photo too.

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  12. Vinay Leo R.10:45 AM

    Hope ur beloved is listening carefully :)

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  13. Lea6:31 PM

    Love, love this pic and haiku... XO

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