Fifteen and eager.
Fifteen and fearless
Fifteen and fearless
Fifteen and immortal.
On the beach bonfires burn
Music plays
Laughter
A meeting of strangers.
False names
A friend's urging
They're so cute
On the beach bonfires burn
Music plays
Laughter
A meeting of strangers.
False names
A friend's urging
They're so cute
What's the harm?
Canyon dark
Unfamiliar sounds at my back
Fifteen and fearful
Fifteen and curious
Closed mouth
Awkward
Eyes opened, eyes closed
First kiss.
Canyon dark
Unfamiliar sounds at my back
Fifteen and fearful
Fifteen and curious
Closed mouth
Awkward
Eyes opened, eyes closed
First kiss.
10 comments:
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Annie!! What a scenic tour you share with us from your train!!
wonderful poem and photo - i love it!
I love it! What a wonderful trip down memory lane, with all its excitement, curiosity and fear! Well done, Annie!
Annie,
I loved this and it made me think of my first "real kiss" I was just wondering about that guy and whatever happened to him..
:)
How sweet is this?! I love that you've captured it in a poem; more words would not have conveyed the same sense of innocence.
How beautiful Annie! Your poetry is very powerful with the fears of that first kiss. XXOO
ps
I have come back here many times to look at this shadow image...and just now it clicked...there seems to be a form of a heart in the light of the shadow...do you see it?
YES, Corey. I do see the stylized shape of a heart. I had not looked that closely before. Thanks for seeing it and pointing it out for us.
Nice and romantic though I was starting to worry for the narrators safety for a moment in the canyon...
Delicious!
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