Monday, February 19, 2007

One Deep Breath - The SPICE of Music

Sob
of
Cello
Trill of flute
Papercutter hush
Lobby Conversations immerse
Greet me as I greet my afternoon
Ragtime piano
Rising scales
Light hums
Soothe
Me

18 comments:

trailbee said...

Oh, those stunning, wonderful, glorious halls!

AscenderRisesAbove said...

the rhythm of a day. wonderful.

diana said...

beautifully written annie.

Star said...

What a creative twist to the spice theme, and you even did it forward and backward! All your brain cells are working at full capacity today, Annie.

Becca said...

How very clever of you! Each instrument does have it's own spicy flavor that adds a unique quality when blended with others.

Great job!

Brian said...

Love the way you have created a unique poem with this prompt. It builds like the music and then fades away.

Jone said...

Wow. What a wonderful afternoon.

Gypsy Purple said...

Wow...amazing choice of words...lovely

Chamara

Crafty Green Poet said...

Lovely, very creative response to the prompt.

Regina Clare Jane said...

So creative, Annie! I loved how how you did it forwards and backwards, too!

Tiffany said...

Great take on the prompt. I like how the poem looks like a diamond.

paris parfait said...

Great work Annie - the forwards and backwords coming together to form the chorus.

Tammy said...

This was filled with visual music Annie...bravo!

Remiman said...

Annie,
There are many ways to add spice to ones life and music is sure at the top of the list. It's obvious that you put some effort into creating this crescendo/diminuendo.
rel

whitney said...

Wonderful fibs! I love the forwards backwards technique. I can see the music :o)

get zapped said...

You soothed me with your fib song. This is spectacular!

Sandy said...

This is beautiful, Annie.

erin said...

beautiful! It even looks beautiful!

thanks,

e