Saturday, July 28, 2012

Haiku Heights and Haiku My Heart



Never forget me
Forget me not, beloved

Warm my chill blue heart

















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13 comments:

Vaishali Jain said...

I liked the, "Warm my chill blue heart" Well written, Annie!

Btw, there are more than 17 syllables in your haiku.

Keep writing! :)

J C said...

Great haiki. Picture fits it perfectly. Love it.

Sri Valli said...

Beautiful haiku straight from heart!

carol l mckenna said...

...warm my chill blue heart ~ wonderfully contemplative haiku ~~ thanks, namaste, (A Creative Harbor)

Chèvrefeuille said...

A wonderfully crafted haiku in good balance and very strong in his meaning. As the other commenters already said ... that last sentence is great.

Namaste

Annie Jeffries said...

All fixed, Vaishali. Thanks for the heads up. :-)

Ron. said...

Memorable work. Well done.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

May the warmth come!

My Forget-Me-Nots

Vinay Leo R. said...

Very interesting haiku!

Leo

Vaishali Jain said...

You're welcome, Annie! The change fits well too. :)

sandy said...

i like this! and the photo too.

Vinay Leo R. said...

Hope ur beloved is listening carefully :)

Lea said...

Love, love this pic and haiku... XO