Saturday, July 28, 2012

Haiku Heights and Haiku My Heart



Never forget me
Forget me not, beloved

Warm my chill blue heart

















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13 comments:

Vaishali Jain said...

I liked the, "Warm my chill blue heart" Well written, Annie!

Btw, there are more than 17 syllables in your haiku.

Keep writing! :)

judie said...

Great haiki. Picture fits it perfectly. Love it.

Vållῐ ★☆ said...

Beautiful haiku straight from heart!

ArtMuseDog and Carol said...

...warm my chill blue heart ~ wonderfully contemplative haiku ~~ thanks, namaste, (A Creative Harbor)

Kristjaan Panneman said...

A wonderfully crafted haiku in good balance and very strong in his meaning. As the other commenters already said ... that last sentence is great.

Namaste

Annie said...

All fixed, Vaishali. Thanks for the heads up. :-)

Ron. said...

Memorable work. Well done.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

May the warmth come!

My Forget-Me-Nots

Leo said...

Very interesting haiku!

Leo

Vaishali Jain said...

You're welcome, Annie! The change fits well too. :)

sandy said...

i like this! and the photo too.

Leo said...

Hope ur beloved is listening carefully :)

Lea said...

Love, love this pic and haiku... XO