I liked the, "Warm my chill blue heart" Well written, Annie!Btw, there are more than 17 syllables in your haiku. Keep writing! :)
Great haiki. Picture fits it perfectly. Love it.
Beautiful haiku straight from heart!
...warm my chill blue heart ~ wonderfully contemplative haiku ~~ thanks, namaste, (A Creative Harbor)
A wonderfully crafted haiku in good balance and very strong in his meaning. As the other commenters already said ... that last sentence is great.Namaste
All fixed, Vaishali. Thanks for the heads up. :-)
Memorable work. Well done.
May the warmth come!My Forget-Me-Nots
Very interesting haiku!Leo
You're welcome, Annie! The change fits well too. :)
i like this! and the photo too.
Hope ur beloved is listening carefully :)
Love, love this pic and haiku... XO
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