Thursday, January 10, 2013

Haiku My Heart






Patter beating heart
Lost in questions of longing
Anon, time answers
N
N
In quests for answers
No yearning reaches from me
Guide a dimming light

15 comments:

Spadoman said...

Love the ceiling of that covered walk in the photo. I like the way you've used the letters of a word to start each haiku. Great job!

Peace

somepinkflowers said...

{{{ aaahhh...

in time
they
come...

it seems
answers find us
where*ever we may travel


how do they know
where to look ?? ♥ }}

WabiSabi said...

It is good to get to the place of 'no yearning'!! if only for a few minutes.

Carol L McKenna said...

Very creative writing of haiku and meaning ~

A Creative Harbor) aka ArtMuseDog and Carol ^_^

Lea said...

This is so lovely Annie... I feel that I am on a quest or journey in your haiku and image, I sit patiently, quietly, and will move when that faint light takes my hand...

Poet Laundry said...

Creatively done...I like how you did this :)

Stephanie said...

Always searching, sometimes when I quit searching they seem to appear!

x...x

Lulu said...

happy new year my friend

Laura said...

beautiful Annie!

Meri said...

Lovely form and words.

Norma Ruttan said...

definitely a heavenly ceiling! this is the 3rd place I've encountered about questions or prayers being answered...in time! God's time, I'd say.
Maybe I'm mixed up, but I think it was you to whom I spoke of the former daughter-in-law. Any way, she called to make sure it was okay to come have coffee with me today. After we talked for a while, I remembered that today is the 11th- the anniversary of my husband's death. She always spends a part of the day if she is not working. She's a gem, right?

gma said...

Tis lovely this planning stage as is the happily ever after part.
xx

rebecca said...

your photograph is so inviting. it calls one out in courage and boldness.
so glad all your patient waiting has
been answered!
long live love!

Marit said...

"Lost in questions of longing" - what a breathtaking line that is! I wonder if it is OK that I 'steal' that line to use in one of my art journals someday... enjoy your weekend!

Priti.Lisa said...

so creative!
your anticipation is contagious!