Saturday, March 31, 2007

Sunday Scribble - Deepest, Darkest

















I don't go there
There is nothing there I want to visit.
Nothingness won't come alive - if
I don't go there.

22 comments:

colleen said...

And yet, I'm drawn into it.

Jone said...

What an interesting photo. Your poem goes well with it. Visting deep and dark secrets isn't any fun.

ish said...

Late (for me) comes the wisdom to see that it is 'nothingness' that postures so persuasively. Like Colleen, I am drawn into your tunnel image. Nice find by the way.

Beaman said...

The long dark tunnel, a perfect place for ghost stories.

paris parfait said...

I wouldn't want to enter that dark, forbidding place - at least not without a powerful torch!

Regina Clare Jane said...

Hmm... I wouldn't go there either...

CattyCat said...

This is a unique picture and I love your Haiku. You are just so good at them.

Tammy said...

I went there but left quickly ;) XXOO

Beautiful music too!

Kara said...

Loved how you used the words and the image. I was too afraid to write about the deepest, darkest but I wish I'd thought of writing a haiku.

Mardougrrl said...

I liked this negation of the prompt...and love the haiku.

Crafty Green Poet said...

I wouldn't want to go into that tunnel either....

Patois said...

Many places are best left unvisited. Excellent match, picture and poem.

Remiman said...

AnnieElf,
I enter there-in
With fearful trepidation.
Hark, light at the end!
rel

Colorful Prose said...

How true that most of our deepest, darkest selves is steeped in denial. Poignant thought.

Pat Paulk said...

Fantastic poem!! Thanks for visiting my blog!

Autrice DelDrago said...

Bad memories, depression, sad thoughts - or just a dark tunnel - you expressed it well, and I enjoyed pondering it.

omg said...

Ah, a wonderful take on the prompt. And the picture is perfect.

Jemima said...

True. But sometimes it's good to explore what we keep 'there'.

Gypsy Purple said...

Excellent!!!
So true!!!

[a} said...

Awesome..
The photo's a perfect complement. The black nothingness is magnetic.

Rethabile said...

Very efficient. Succinct and... wham! Goes with the picture like crazy.

homeinkabul2 said...

Both the photo and the haiku drew me in...well done.